Monday, August 15, 2005

Miscarriage

No poem. The words just won’t fit together this time!! It’s so frustrating!
So what do u do when you’re failed by the word?
Bitch and moan is what u do ;)


انظر كيف تضحك الشموع
حين يتعثر بي القلم
وتسخر مني الوريقات

انظرني ألملم حاجياتي بين سطورها
أقوم أتبختر
وأجلس على حواف الكلمات



I am a grain of sand with a brain.
Bliss & peace are mine to attain.
If I could just drop this brain and remain a grain!

6 Comments:

At 6:29 AM, Blogger Equalizer said...

Well if you think while writing a poem, then its no longer a poem. The point is not to show how smart you are in words. Its not a legal document! Whatever comes to mind you write and whatever the result is......its a poem. Have you seen Jackson Pollack's paintings?

 
At 8:54 AM, Blogger Peach said...

equalizer ;)
Welcome to my blog.
And yes thinking. That's exactly it! Words would come to me out of thin air sometimes but once I hold the pen and jot down the first couple of words .. Poff!! Mind gets in the way and tripples the whole thing down. It happens sometimes ;) U just gotta wait on it.
I've seen a couple of paintings yes, they are wonderfully vivid! What about them?

Kuwaitigirl,
If you want personal I can give you plenty of that ;) But it's not considered any where near Poetry ;p Khawa6ir would be the Arabic word, not sure there is an english one!
And I will keep at it thanks ;) Whether something comes out of it or not, the plesure is in trying right?

 
At 6:25 PM, Blogger Qa6Wa said...

ya, i also agree... but its good to be able to express yourself in the right words,, sometimes i cant n its so hard... mashalla 3leach :)

 
At 7:45 AM, Blogger Peach said...

Blasha, Thanks hon ;) But as u can see it's not always so easy. I feel the same way u do.

 
At 3:44 PM, Blogger Muhammad Aladdin said...

I loved reading that,really :)

 
At 11:07 PM, Blogger Peach said...

yeah me too .. but I couldn't finish it looool

 

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